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Boyer’s idea of an enriched major is used to help students “put their potential field of study into perspective.” (Boyer) Boyers ideas are a way to help students find and determine whether or not a major is important and helps them discover their field in depth. There are three questions that help students determine whether or not their major is enriched. One of the questions is what are the social and economic implications. In the nursing program, the social implications come into play in the third and fourth-year curriculum with clinical programs. With clinical, nursing majors work as real nurses for a clinical requirement. This brings nursing students to the real field, where they socially work with other people to help find solutions to medical problems. Clinical provides hands-on experience for nursing majors.
Boyer’s idea of an enriched major is used to help students “put their potential field of study into perspective.” (Boyer) Boyers ideas are a way to help students find and determine whether or not a major is important and helps them discover their field in depth. This allows students to dive deeper into the curriculum. A deeper dive into the curriculum means that students go deeper than just class time with clinical hours. The clinical hours takes a student out of the classroom and moves them into the field of study. The nursing major is one of the only programs at UNE that takes students out of the classroom and into the real field. This provides the necessary experience for students to transition from being a student to being a nurse in real life. That is part of the reason why the nursing major is so exclusive and challenging to get into. There are three questions that help students determine whether or not their major is enriched. One of the questions is what are the social and economic implications. In the nursing program, the social implications come into play in the third and fourth-year curriculum with clinical programs. With clinical, nursing majors work as real nurses for a clinical requirement. This brings nursing students to the real field, where they socially work with other people to help find solutions to medical problems. Clinical provides hands-on experience for nursing majors.
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